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初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:54浏览次数:3310
要求:
以“我最喜爱的电影”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
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my favorite film I have seen a lot of films , and "Spiderman" is my favorite film. Because the actor in the film is as the same as me . He is a normal man without his armor , he is not only shy and a little "stupid" for other students but also not strong and handsome.But he has a brave heart. he likes to help others . He is a real fighter when he wear his armor.He always protects the good people and keeps order in his city.Everyone likes him ,everyone need to a hero.

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