湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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Our Monitor I have a very nice monitor.Her name is Lucy.Let me tell you something about her. She is 13 years old.She is very tall and fat.Her eyes are very major.She like sport clothes.She like red best.but I don't. This is my monitor.Do you tend to make friends with her?