湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；请注意分段。

Our monitor Lily is a thirteen years old lovely girl with long hair and bright eyes. She is usually wearing a pink shirt which makes her skin more white, I am happy to be her friend not only because we are in common on may matters but her hard working and warm heart.