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初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:04浏览次数:2425
要求:
以“如何保护我们的眼睛 How To Protect Our Eyes ”为主题写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
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Eyes are windows of the heart, which means eyes are very important to us. But more and more students wear glasses nowadays, according to my opinion, there are a few factors we must pay attention to in our lives. firstly, we should not spend much time on electric devices, like cell phones, watch TV, play games on the computer, because Blu-ray is bad for our eyes and very harmful. after we had studied for a half hour or an hour, we'd better listen to music or look far into the distance. secondly, on weekends, we should do more exercise, like play Pingpong, baskets, football, cycling, swimming, etc. more exercise is good for children's health and bodies. Finally, we could eat more green vegetables and fresh fruits and keep a happy mood every day.

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