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Yestoday was a very interesting day for Sam .He got up at morning six clock .then he go to the park by bike .he have had a realy fun at the park .He had the lunch at McDonald's with his parents .After lunch ,Sam play baskateball with his classmates from PM4:00 till PM6:0.Sam go for a walk with his facther after supper.his father bought him a classical musical CD .It really a such fun day of Sam .
