七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；作者词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up at six o'clock at yestoday morning .Then he went to the park by bike ,he was really happy stay in the park .At noon ,he has lunch with his parents at McDonald's .At afternoon ,he palyed basketball with his classmates from four to six .After dinner ,he went for a walk with his father .His father bought him a classical CD .What a funny day Sam had.