七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday and went to a park by biycle. he was very happy to play in the park. He had a lunch in McDonald's with his parents at noon. Then he played basketball at school with his classmates from 4 p.m to 6 p.m. After having a supper, sam and his father went for a walk, and father bought a classical music CD for him. How sam very interesting for the day!