2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays, more and more goods are packed excessively. The reason for excessive packaging is that it can bring the sellers more margine profits. Does the customers need the packaging or the goods itself? Obviously, it is the goods. Goods excessive packed are often been overpriced. It costs customers more money. And it is no use for them. So, we should not choose those goods which are on excessive packaing.