2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays, more and more goods are packed excessively. The reason why the goods are packaged excessively is that it can bring the sellers more margine profits. Does the customers need the packaging or the goods itself? Obviously, it is the goods. Goods which were packed excessively are often been overpriced. It costs customers more money. It is no use for them. So, we should not select those goods which are on excessive packaging.