2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中用词稍显贫乏；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays, more and more goods are packed excessively. The reason why the goods are packaged excessively is that it can bring the sellers more margine profits. Usually, goods which were packaged excessively are often expensive and overpriced. The seller charge the customers with the goods as well as the packaging. Do the customers need the packaging or the goods itself? Obviously, it is the goods. It costs customers more money. It is no use for them. Once the goods are taken out of the package, the package were abandoned. So, we should not select those items which are on excessive packaging.