湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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We all have monitor during our school ,so do i .The most imppresive monitor during my school days is Amy ,who was the monitor when i was in class 4 grade 3.She is a girl with 14 years old .She is a little fat ,with round face and short hair.She always wear in red color,it is like her passion.She worked very hard,and also help peoples who needs help.we all love her.