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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Some people think that financial disparity friendship affects friendship, but i will frown on this. How to define friendship is something we have to do before we decide which side we will stand. In my perspective, friendship means lots of things while money is only one aspect of that. Apart from that , there are far more to mention such as emotion. Just as the saying goes: a friend in need is a friend indeed. then , what do we need in our life especially when we get into troubles ? Just Money ? Definitely not. For instance, when we break up with our girlfriend or boyfriend ,we need someone to comfort us and that one is probably our friend. He needn't have a mint of money to console us.What he is expected to do is to stay with us and listen to us. From my point of view, friendship is just like marriage. We are looking for a soul-mate who can relate to us not a millionaire. So we can draw a conclusion that true friendship will not be affected due to financial disparity.
