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Dear Editor, As the improvement of life quality, more and more people own their personal vehicles. Just like all of the other new emerging things, people have complex attitude towards them. Therefore a debate had been hold in our class. The debate was so dramatic. According to their perspective, students were separated to two groups-the positive and the negative. The positive claimed several conclusions. Firstly, they believed that vehicles provided us a convenient, fast pace, comfortable lifestyle.Secondly, they pointed out that more residents who owned vehicles meant that the residents life quality is improving and the country is becoming richer. Thirdly, they thought auto industry was a engine for other industries. Of course, the negative also had their reasons. they pointed out that vehicle exhaust played a important role in air pollution. At the same time, they also deemed too many vehicles caused more traffic jams and incidents which would affect transportation. In addition, they considered that as more and more vehicles being used, finding places to park them became an increasingly prominent problem.
