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Civilized manners plays a important role in the International communication,so we hold a classmeeting in order to experss everyone's thought. I think sivilized behavoir is very impotant,because one native image should to be done in little things.but ,we still can see some bad behavior in the steets,such as spit here and there ,throw litter around,pick flowers and so on.We must stop doing this .it's our duty to maintain our country's image,that's all.