加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
It's very important to protect our eyes!The reason is that our eyes is too tired.We use it look all things.You know,some of people work use computer all day.The eyes is radiation reached unheard-of levels.On the street,we can see some of peopel wears glasses.They are myopic eye.The students are reading many books and eyes not protected.They are parents worry it.Now more and more students wear glasses.We shuold less use our eyes long time.And look the green trees.Keep our eyes is clear.