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Sam waked up at Six Oclock' in the morning yesterday. And then he drove bicycle go to the park. He was playing so happy in the garden. Midday, he and his parents had have lunch. From four Oclock' until six Oclock' at the afternoon, Sam and his classmates were playing basketball at the school. After the dinner, Sam and his father went for a walk, his father bought a piece of classical music CD sent to him. Sam passed a beautiful day!
