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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中句子错误偏多了；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
It is a winter in my contry now , and the climate is very cold, the weather often windy and cold , every people wears coats and scarves, and many people chooses eatting lunch in restaurants, it sometimes snows here , many children like making snowman,and they have a good time.
