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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
It is a winter in my country now,and the climate is very cold,the weather often windy and cold,every people wear coats and scarves,and many people choose to eat lunch in restaurants, it sometimes snows here,many children like making snowman,and they have a good time, my country is very pleasant in winter.
