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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11041
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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My favorite sport is football. Football is a combination of power and speed which also calls for passion and team spirit. Nevertheless none of these is the real reason that I'm hooked by football. I fall in love with football by accident. One day I picked a football by chance on my way home, then I played with my friends, from then on I was deeply in love with football. Now I am a member of our school team. So I am always training with my classmates and match with other school teams. I'm one of the best football players in our school. Of course, watching football game is one of the most attractive entertainment for us. I prefer watching premier league to others. My favorite football star is Britain's David Beckham. I hope one day I can become a professional football player like him.

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