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Dear George, Since you inquired about information of a household hotel in my hometown and wanted to stay in that hotel for a period of time in this summer holiday, now I provide all of the details about the hotel.There are single room and double room, for single room 30RMB per day and for double room 20RMB per day one guy. You should spend 20RMB for food one day. If you want, you can have lunch with the hotel owner. There is a menu, so you can order what you want. Otherwise, you should cook by yourself.There are so many interesting things you can do during that time, such as swimming, mountaineering and working in greenhouse as a volunteer. To be honest, Living in a household hotel has more advantage than in normal hotel. In there you can not only close to understand China but also can feel the family atmosphere.