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With development of the person's life and improve,more and more people have own them cars,for this problem,we have a classmeeting.There are two thoughts,many of the classmates think the car is comfortable and cheap,it's a convenient transportation.Everyone can have a car easily,it's also can know about our country had improved a lot and the GDP were increased in many years,it took others industry .but the other students disagree this thought,it may cause air pullution,traffic accident,it make traffic terrible and cars problem will be serious.
