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文章衔接手法恰当；句式灵活多变，但文中的句子错误偏多；作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
With development of the person's life and improve,more and more people have own them cars,for this problem,we have a class meeting. There are two thoughts,many of the classmates think the car is comfortable and ,it is inexpensive a convenient transportation.Everyone can have a car easily,it's also can know about our country had improved a lot and the GDP were increased in many years,it took others industry . but the other students disagree this thought,it may cause air pullution,traffic accident,it make traffic terrible and cars problem will be serious.
