七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Yesterday, Sam geted up at six a.m.And then he ridded bike to park.He is so happy when he played in park.At 12 clock he and his parents haved a lunch in McDonald's,Sam and his classmates played basketball from four to six houly.After dinner Sam and his father went for a walk.His father buied a music CDfor him,This day Sam feelled so funny.