七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at 6:00 am yesterday, then he went to park by bicycle, he had a great time in park. Afternoon, he had a meal at McDonald's with his parents for lunch. After that Sam went to play basketball with his classmates in the school till 6:00pm.After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, his father bought a classical music CD for him. What a wonderful day Sam had!