初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

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How to protect our eyes Everyone have two eyes.We can use our eyes to see everything.So we need to protect our eyes.But how to protect our eyes?At first,we need ti do some eyes excises everyday.Scend,we must need to take a rest when we watching TV or playing computer after severs hours.In the end,we can eat some vagetables.Especillally green vagetable.I thing if wo do our best to this tip,our eyes well always helthly.