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Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday. Then he went to the park by bike.He played so happy in the park.He had a lunch with his parents in McDonald's at noon.Sam and his classmates played basketball in the school from 4 PM till 6 PM that afternoon.Sam and his father went for a walk after dinner. His father bought a musical CD for him.How funny is Sam all day!