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Tom has many rules.Everyday Tom has to get up at 6 o'clock and then go to school at fifteen six. Tom can't eat outside.He also can't listen to the music and watch TV on school days.Tom must be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.This is Tom's rules.