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Eyes are very important to us,so we should protect our eyes.But how to protect our eyes. First,when we have readed the book or watched TV over an hour,we should let our eyes leave books and TV. Second,We should do eyes protect exceice every day. Lastly,We should eat apple and banana. This is the way of which how to protect our eyes.