2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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from this grapher , we can know the different education level among those people to make a big difference. It's appearant that the higher education level matchs with more wages. In addition ,the unemployment rate also exists distance. we can get the information about that is that the lower level education people tend to have a high unemployed rate.