高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

衔接成分偏少；加强句式变化和从句的使用，文章会增色不少；文中拼写错误稍多，作者词汇量偏小；连词使用偏少。

my favorite sprot My favorite sport is football .A by changce ,I was chrming with football. On the back home road, I'm look a football and with some friend by paly this football .Accordingly, I 'm deenpen love paly football .I;m constanly test and paly with my classmate . My best like football payer star is beikehanmu I hope my can become a professional player.