七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Yesterday Sam got up at six o'clock .And then he went to park by bike .He plays very much .Noon he ate at McDonald's with his parents. Afternoon Sam plays basketball with his classmate .They till 0four o 'clock to six o' clock.After dinner , Sam went for a walk with his father.His father given him a music CD.What is a fun day !!