福建长汀四中2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

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My monitor is Wang Jiajun.He is 12-year-boy.He is handsome and tall.He like playing ping-pong.Look!he is over there.Today he in red.He like red very much.What is he doing?Can you guess?I think you can.He is running now.He like running too.He often help me when I need help.He is very nice.We like him very much.