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Stepping into 21st century,we are now living information-explosion era.Some people think that students should study in single sex schools better than co-ed school.However,I tend to agree that students live single sex schools. With era develop,increasingly people enjoy enrich colourful teaching method,include student.In the other hand,students study effective that is working time.Such as, many parents think that teacher bad method lead to student score is bad, there is very laughable thinking.It is clear that the best study method is decide that students' grade.So,I believe that students study quality do not connect type of school. The second, student need adapt to many different society.Nowadays,many student live in parents embrace which helped to solve every things.Such as,when students has a difficult,they can miss parents in the first time.If parents always help to student,whose can lose self-motivated.There is very trouble that student can not live society.It is clear that students live in co-ed schools,they can contact many different things. Nonetheless,students do not have a limit,because they are children.There is increasingly atmosphere which puppy love.It is known that student has many curiosity that do not control their thinks.I think that there is a big problem. Overall,I tend to agree that students live single sex school.Only in this way can they enrich their a kind of ability.