雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:学校 schools

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

Stepping into the 21st century, we are now living information-explosion era.Some people think that students should study in single sex schools better than co-ed school.However, I tend to agree that students live in single sex schools. With era development,increasingly people enjoy rich colourful teaching method, include the studentOn the other hand, students study effect that is working time.Such as, many parents think that teacher bad method lead to student score is bad, there is very laughable thinking.It is clear that the best study method is decided that students''s grade.So, I believe that students study quality do not connect the type of school. The second, student need adapt to many different societies.Nowadays,many students live in parents embrace which helped to solve every thing.Such as,when students have a difficult,they can miss parents for the first time.If parents always help to student, who's can lose self-motivated.There is very trouble that student cannot live in society.It is clear that students live in co-ed schools. They can contact many different things. Nonetheless,students do not have a limit,because they are children.There is increasingly atmosphere which puppy love.It is known that the student has much curiosity that does not control their thinks.I think that there is a big problem. Overall,I tend to agree that students live in a single sex school.Only in this way can they enrich them kind of ability.