2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以；作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了。

Information era narrowed our world,widen our horizon.In this modern time,what,you may wonder,is the meaning of communication. the first and the former,communicating with others is not merely complain about your life,it is the means of expressing your emotion.when you upset ,you may call your confidants and tell them what happened,then,comments on this trivia could make things clear-cut.your mind can be diversed from emotional to scientic.Secondly,slum is a bad habit,because it may damage our livers and hearts.we were born in different environment and recieve different education,we must differ in value which related to phylosophy or our life.if we don't communicate,we can't understand another's view,where could make us seperate from each other. In my opinion,if it were not communication,we would lose lots of joys.