2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing succeeds without a strong will As the saying goes:"There is a river, there is a will". A strong will is the important promise to get success. There are some reasons in the follow. First of all, when we on our way to struggle, we may suffer from a hradship. In this time, a strong will approves of us and encourage us to overcome difficulties by ourselves or others help. Second, it makes me believe that when the lord closes a door, it opens a window. That is vital. Because when we are stuck in a narrow difficulty, you don't see a way. And you are frustration and depression. But a strong will