小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Zhongyan, my best friend, who has beautiful eyes with a cute face. In my opinion, she is a girl who alway ready to help others. when i 'm down and all alone, she will come and by my side to cherry me. I think she is a treasure to. It' s my best honor that we became good friend. Though she isn' t the top student in our class, she's patient and respects others. she is my best friend,till the end!