小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Zhongyan, my best friend, who has beautiful eyes with a cute face. In my opinion, she is a girl who always ready to help others. when I' m down and all alone, she will come and to cherry me. I think she is a treasure to me. It' s honor that we became a good friend. Though she isn' t the top student in our class, she's kind and respects others. She is my best friend,till the end!