小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher, who has black long hair,which looks very beatiful. She is kind, unlike my senior teacher, she aiways encourages our with her smile inshead of punishing. she like flowers, especially lutos. I think she just as beautiful and elegant as lutos. She is quiet, and her voice is soft. She is kownledge, too. She has been redd many books and konws many.