小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher, who has black long hair,which looks very beatiful. She is kind, who unlike my former teacher, she always encourages our with her smile instead of punishing. she like flowers, especially lutes. I think she just as beautiful and elegant as lutos. She is gentle and quiet, and her voice is soft. She is konwledge, too. She has been redd many books and konws many.