小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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It' s said that dogs are friends of people. My family has a dog, it' s name is Dudu. Dudu is so likes eating that it' s very fat. Hoever,it is good at sports. when it running, the conglobate body rocking which looks like a ball,it' s funny. And now, Dudu is nine-year-old, and it has companied me for nine years. We are good friend.