小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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It' s said that dogs are friends of people. and my family has a dog, whose name is Dudu. Dudu is so likes eating that it' s very fat. However,it is good at sports.So when it running, the fat body rocking which looks like a ball, it' s funny. And now, Dudu is nine-year-old, and it has companied me for nine years. We are the good friend.