小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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There is a photograph on the table ,which is of Jim' s family . We can see five persons in the photograph. The old man who sitting the chair is Jim' s gradfather, by his right side is whose lover, Jim' m gradmother.Both of them were retired. And the man fourtiesomething was Jim' s father, the boss of a company. The woman who bowing a baby is Jim' s mother, of course, she is a housewife, and the baby she bowing is Jim. Have you guessed right?