小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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There is a photograph on the table,which is of Jim' s family. We can see five persons in the photograph. The old man who sits the chair is Jim' s grandfather, by his right side is whose lover, Jim' m grandmother.Both of them were retired. And the man outsmarting was Jim' s father, the boss of a company. The woman who takes care of a baby is Jim' s mother, of course, she is a housewife, and the baby she bowing is Jim. Have you guessed right?