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How should parents help children to be independent Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that parents do anything for children at present. That is seen here and there. some people are arranged from primary school to work. Besides someone is cared from sleeping to marrying. However, the reasons for this are as follows. Firstly, the most important reason is that the child is the only baby in this famliy. So parents pay more attention to protect and attend them. Secondly, from parents' point, the children don't deal with the a variety of problems well. It's well known to us that practice is the sole criterion for testing truth. But the chidren are not given chances to do themselves. It's harmful to them. Some changes have taken place in themselves. They tend to rely on parents. That leads to the bad results.
