小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

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Brond' s family has a clock, which is gold,and its form was just like a big rose. It was bought five years ago by brond' s grandfather, brond' s families all love it very mch.And now,the clock was on the wall. Can you see it only If you enter the living-room,which just like a rose is blooming on the wall.It' s so beautiful!