2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

As technology improve rapidly, computer become a necessary in our daily life and also change the way we lived. Compared with previous years, computer give us lots of convenience from having a fun to work. When we feel bored, we can play the computer games, watching movies and talking with our friends though the applicable software and so on. Besides that, we even can shopping on line so that we needn't go to the store and have more choices. And Using the computer with our problems is a basic skill for us to get a good job, such as Word, Excel and so on. we can exchange information timely to adopt the different situations. All in all, it improves our quality of life. But everything has another side. Some people even can't live without it. It seems that we have depended on it too much. They addicted to games and pay a lot on it to get advanced weapons so that they can defeat others, even they know the game is endless. They upload their information to get more follower and satisfied their need to be concern and adore. They just waste time on it. In some ways, computer ruin them. In my opinion, we need to educate people how to use it properly, especially for younger, they don't know how to avoid the bad influences.