福建长汀四中2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

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Our monitor As we all know,a monitor is important to us.There are some reasons for this.Because monitors can help teachers to do something about classes.However,I have a clever and brave monitor.Her name is Lucy.She is a 13-year-old girl.She is friendly to others.She often wear glasses and our school uniform.She is a good friend of mine. In a word,I am sure my classmates and I will have a happier life.