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Creating a green campus Recently the issue of creating a green environment has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the pulic. At the same time , it is essential for us university students to establish a green campus. Because our life are close related to it. However, we everyone plays an imporment role in forming it. So it is crucial that whether we can define the green campus properly or not before some measures are taken. First of all, there are clean dormitories and canteens of good order and quiet classrooms and clear streets. It is a place where we are free to enjoy ourselves. Secondly, we should take a positive attitude to create a nice atmosphere where we can controll us of using the internet rightly instead of being addicted to playing games. What's more, we need pay more attention to keeping balance. It means that we are required to regard the study and the relax equally. In addition to, we have an appropriate balance between mental and physical. Besides, there is a good relationship among the kinds of activities. So what should be done for it? As far as I am concerned, we should do something that is beneficial to improve the enviroment around us. For example, we don't drop rubbish here and there. Furthermore, we can make a detailed plan about how to be a qualified university student. In a word, we everyone should participate the creation of a green campus. Only in this way, can we enjoy the beauty of campus.
