考研作文：关于领导

文章学术词汇表达灵活，但存在拼写错误较多；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Definitely,no one can deny the importance of leadership,or called corporate spirit ,in the enterprise.As it did in the case of Jobs who was Corporate Executive Officer of the Apple.He considered that coporate spirit is the lubricant of success.Still,it need to be free from brilliant leaders.There are two examples as the case in point. Firstly,the Enron Corporate,instructed by Enron,was destructed within one year.Enron empowered his employees whoever they just graduated from the university and are unexperienced.Consequently,too many debts and disordered administration overwhelmed him and his company.Such fact stunned the whole trade and commercial.To further illustrate the significance of leaders,I'll take another instance of Jobs,who changed a word,'apple',transforming a sort of fruit into a symbol of phone.His spirit,never-say-die,established a techinology empire.While in the Silicon Valley where is the most miricle valley around the world. In my prespect,the leader means the central of coagulative power which leaders and employees are aimed at the same target.